This edit will focus on pace, voice, word choice, a light consistency check of characters and settings, and organization at a paragraph level. Some light rewriting of sentences may happen.
You will receive a report evaluating all the elements of your story, suggestions for strengthening those elements, and a recommendation for your next step. The following elements will be evaluated: overall impressions, plot and story line, conflict and tension, character development, dialogue, pacing and readability, point of view, voice and tone, and consistency. Don’t worry! The purpose of an evaluation isn’t to only point out areas for improvement, it’s also to let you know what’s working. Please note: this service is not an edit, you will not receive a marked-up copy of your manuscript.